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Mind Of The Boyfriend

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Main Character-James Benson

Krista Pough(Friend)

Pete Harris(Older Brother)

Julian McCrea(Best Friend)

Stephan Benson(Little Brother)

Stephen Benson(Uncle)

(This is a fictional story that has real people in it and all real situations just the order has been changed in some places to not give away the truth lol)

Rated: PG 13

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(The Story starts in the evening of a friday with james on the phone with Krista his girlfriend. after about 30-35 min on the phone, the two set of a date for the next day)

Krista-alright then

James-so i will see you tomorrow

Krista-ok

James-i love you

(theres an akward pause by both as james wonders if it will be returned and krista pondering how to respond other then saying what she figures james is expecting. after a second or so goes by that seems like longer krista speaks)

Krista-ok i'll talk to you tomorrow

James-cya

Krista-bye

James-bye

(James is thinking to himself whats he doing wrong. Krista is thinking to herself that he is a little to hype and cant really understand why he feels so strongly. she doesn't think he knows that she doesn't really feel that strongly for him.)

(after a few minutes james calls his friend Julian. there talking about Julians party for the weekend.)

Julian-so u gonna bring those speakers and all that speaker wire to my house tomorrow?

James-yeah i got you. what time should i come thru cause i'm going to the movies with krista

Julian-oh well just drop it on the way. you goin to the cheltonham right?

James-yea

Julian-well thats right on the way

James-iight i'll bring it thru then and den on sunday, come over and help set stuff up

Julian-ok thats cool. maybe i'll come to the movies with yall tomorrow. bring my girl

James-naw its already gonna be crowded because krista friend is always there

Julian-why she be taggin along

James-cause she not suppose to have a boyfriend or whatever so she pretends like she goin out with her friend but her friend actually comes

Julian-dawg why dont u just tell her friend to go to another movie or to go home after she helps get ya girl out the house

James-i would but i dont want ta sound mene

Julian-dats fucked up man. so u get no alone time with her

James-naw not much

Julian-u aint fuck

James-i cant even go to the movies with her without her friend around so how i'm gonna do that?

Julian-in the movies ha ha ha

James-come on man chill, its not like dat tho anyway

Julian-oh u like dis girl like dat

James-yeah i love her

Julian-oh days whats up

Jim Benson-Jimmy!!! Dinner

James-ok!!! that was my dad, i got to go. i'll call u before i come thru tomorrow

Julian-iight man.

James-iight

(Julian and jay get off the phone and james eats dinner. after dinner he comes back to his room and goes to bed around 11:30)

(the next morning james wakes up around 8:30. he takes a shower. gets dressed. puts colone on. relizes its to much after putting it on. puts some deorderant on. he picks his hair which was pretty long and then puts some lotion on. after getting ready. he calls movie phone followed by krista. its about 10:30. krista's mom picks up the phone and he asks for krista. after a minute krista gets the phone from her mom and they talk)

Krista-hello

James-whats up

Krista-Hi

James-what time u get up

Krista-like 8:30 but i didnt get up till 9

James-o ok i've been up since like 8:30. i checked and the movie starts at 12:00-1:45

Krista-well i just talked to moriah and she's not ready yet so we should go to the 1:45 show

James-dats cool. how bout i meet u in the mall cause i have to stop by Jay's house anyways first

Krista-what do u have to do there

James-drop off some speakers and wire for the party next friday

Krista-ok

James-i have to get that stuff together so i will see u at the mall

Krista-ok

James-ok cya

Krista-bye

(james gets the stuff together in a gym bag and takes it on the bus to julians house. he knocks on the door. Julian answers and he goes down to the basement with him where there setting up the speakers. when they get down there Julian introduces james to his girlfriend and her cousin...James can tell what is trying to be set up but doesnt say anything to start. Julian puts some music on and starts to play around and dance with his girl. James is chillin, sitting on the couch while the other girl is sitting on the arm of the couch.)

James-so where yall live

Shawna-we live up on Stenton

James-o ok cause u looked familiar

Shawna-yeah i saw u at Antwan's party a few months back

James-o yeah, dats my memory

Shawna-smiles

(james smiles and then starts to get real quiet so that he doesnt give the girl the wrong idea. after a while the girl goes over and starts to dance oviously trying to get james to come dance with her but james just stays in his chair and fakes a headache. after somemore time passes james tells julian he has to get up to the cheltonham. Julian says stay a little longer and he can give james a ride because he has to take the two girls home anyway. james agree's and after putting up only a few speakers julian drives james to the mall first)

Julian-u still coming thru tomorrow to help setup

James-yeah i have to get a hair cut so i will come to your house right after i leave hoops

Julian-alight man

(Julian pulls off and james walks into the mall. after walking around a little bit he finally see's krista and moriah in the cd store. they all walk around the mall for awhile going into numerous stores. after about 30 minutes of doing that they go to the theater. there in the theater and are waiting for the movie. not much is being said all around. james puts his arm around krista)

(krista is thinking to herself that this is not that comfortable)

(james is thinking this is not that confortable. i would rather be holding her hand cause it would work better for the kind of seats there are at the cheltonham theater)

(Moriah is thinking this third wheel thing sucks ass)

(the movie starts and all are watching)

(James is watching the movie but is also thinking that he wants to tell krista that he loves her in person because he thinks maybe thats part of why it seems to him like she doesn't believe it. also he is trying to think of a way to get away from moriah so he can kiss krista because he is a little shy and has not really kissed a girl like that in front of people. but at the sametime he is thinking about doing it in front of people so it shows he is not tryna hide anything. also he is thinking does she want him to kiss her. he does not want to make a mistake that could mess things up)

(krista is thinking if he kisses me is he gonna try and give tounge. i hope not cause then i'm gonna have to embarress his ass by pushing his face away)

(After the movie the three of them go around the theater somemore.)

(james is thinkin why cant moriah go some fuckin where, why cant all these people go somewhere. he laughs to himself inside and it comes out as a smirk.)

(There In The CD Store)

Moriah-i have to go to the bathroom

(they all walk toward the bathroom. moriah goes in, and then krista goes in)

(James mind-shit, maybe krista will come out a lil before moriah. hopefully moriah has diaria or something. i'm not hopeing she has diaria, it was just be convient. come on GOD give me this one)

(Moriah walks out first)

(James Mind-shit guess she just had to wash her hands cause she was only in there 20 seconds. fuckin got my hopes up. why couldn't she do dat at home. aww fuck it i will just do it when she comes out, i dont care)

(a small group of people walk to the back where the bathrooms are and are standing at the phones)

(James mind-i cant fuckin win.)

(after krista comes out the bathroom the three of them walk around the mall a little more before walking to the bus stop and james and krista saying goodnight....after they are across the street walking toward krista's house he relizes he didnt get to tell her in person like he planed that he loved her)

(James Mind-aint that bout a bitch. all this tryna kiss her and i didnt get a chance to tell her how i feel in person)

(James goes home and is down on the whole day cause nothing went his way. but then he thinks about hugging krista and being able to see her pretty smile and his frown is turned up side down. the whole day turns from negative to positive and he is just happy now. he is home and beings to get some food to eat. he orders a cheese steak and eats it before climing into bed to watch some tv. after watching tv for a while he turns the tv off and climes under the covers and says an outloud prayer. its not really a prayer but him talking to GOD)

James-thank you for this day, i know i dont talk to you much, except when i am in trouble or need something and i do need some things but i just wanna thank you tonight for giving a chance to spend time with krista. i just hope i get more

(james turns to his side to go to sleep and is thinking)

(James mind-GOD i really love her, hopefully u can make her see that and maybe she will one day feel the way i do, i'm not rushing anything but just hope one day she returns my feelings cause its hard to here it and then her not say it back. its kinda a twisting knot feeling in my stomach that i cant shake. alright thanks for listening, goodnight)

(just as he says goodnight in his mind and puts his head fully down on the pillow he knocks his control witch was on the pillow on the ground which kinda disrupts his feeling of tiredness some how and starts thinking

(James mind-crap!! why am i going to sleep anyways, i am not even tired)

(james grabs the control off the floor and watches tv till early in the morning)